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The insomnia has been bad the last couple of nights, which is to say it has been worse than usual. I didn't get to sleep this morning until the sky was already brightening, sometime after 5 ayem.

Yesterday, we read chapters 4 and 5 from the The Red Tree page proofs, and today we made it through chapters 6 and 7, which means we should be able to finish tomorrow. I am abysmally slow when it comes to proofreading galleys (or any other sort of ms., I suspect). I know many authors are much quicker with these things. I recall, back in May of 2001, I was staying with Peter and Susan Straub in Manhattan, and Peter was going over the galley's for Black House. I seem to remember him doing it in a single day. If I can get through a set of galley pages for a novel in anything less than a week, I consider myself lucky.

I'd love to hear feedback about Sirenia Digest #41.

Last night, I made the extraordinarily unlikely discovery that Species 4: The Awakening (2007) is the most watchable of the series. Not a good movie, no, but a perfectly watchable cheesy monster film (doubling as soft-core porn for those of us with a thing for alien sex). Also, I reread William Gibson's "The Hinterlands" (1982), which never ceases to amaze me. It had an enormous influence on The Dry Salvages, though I don't think I was aware of the influence when I was writing the novella. It certainly is a marvelous expression of the sort of cosmic horror that is so often called "Lovecraftian," though I doubt HPL was a direct inspiration for "The Hinterlands." Then again, without asking Gibson, I can't be sure (and we've never met). If I could ever write a story as perfect as "The Hinterlands," I think I'd finally be satisfied with my work. And no, it's not the search for perfection that keeps me writing. Most times, I feel like, more than anything else, it's force of habit and the need to pay the bills.

There are three photos behind the cut, just some mundane stuff from the last few days:

Days and Days )
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So, yes. Today I can make the Second Big Announcement (you will recall Beowulf was the first). In the spring of 2008, Subterranean Press will release the 3rd edition of Tales of Pain and Wonder, as trade and limited hardbacks. I am more excited about this than I have been about any project in quite some while. The book will include all the stories, etc. from the Gauntlet (1999) and Meisha Merlin (2002) editions, plus a new story and a new author's introduction. All Richard Kirk's interior illustrations will be reprinted, and my great thanks to Rick for tracking down good scans these thirteen images, as he long ago sold the original artwork to collectors. There will be a new cover (artist to be announced). It is my intention that this will be, at last, the true definitive edition of the text, and all the horrid errors that somehow crept into the Meisha Merlin edition (despite my painstaking copyediting) will be excised.

That said, many will be asking what then is to become of my plans for a free electronic edition of the book? In short, those plans have been shelved, at least for the life of the subpress edition. In the meanwhile, I will be releasing a free electronic edition of The Dry Salvages instead, under a Creative Commons license. Regardless, my thanks to everyone who volunteered, months ago, to do the annotations for an e-version of Tales of Pain and Wonder.

Yesterday almost felt like a "normal" day. The Beowulf page proofs went back in the mail to HarperCollins (well, back in the UPS). I tried to write, and spent most of the day trying to write, but in the end scrapped everything I'd done. Sometimes that happens. I spoke with my lit agent about contracts, as we have contracts in the works for my next two novels with Penguin, the new edition of Tales of Pain and Wonder, and The Dinosaurs of Mars. We had a very good walk at sunset. The sky was filled with swallows, and when we reached Inman Park, Spooky spotted the slimmest silver-grey rind of the waxing moon, just visible in the western sky. Back home, I read more of Chris Beard's book on early primates. I napped and bathed. Later, we spent two or three hours in Second Life, erecting the glass and steel walls of the Palaeozoic Museum's atrium in New Babbage. I'll post some images here soon. It is going to be amazing. [livejournal.com profile] blu_muse ("Cerdwin Flanagan") dropped in while we were building, and much virtual silliness ensued. Later still, I crawled away to bed, and Spooky read me Chapter Seven of The Ersatz Elevator by Lemony Snicket, which we have long neglected (bad kids). So, yes, a "normal" day. And I even got a good night's sleep.

Spooky just returned from the p.o., and the platypus is chomping at the bit. So I will wrap this up. Oh, my thanks to everyone who bid and bought in the latest round of eBay auctions. Okay. Onward, platypus.

Postscript (3:50 p.m.): Spooky's trying to get back into the eBay habit, as the boxes of my books are beginning to take over the house (and the money's always nice). She had relisted The Five of Cups (trade hardcover, PC), along with one of my last five copies of From Weird and Distant Shores (trade hardcover, PC) and a copy of Daughter of Hounds. Regarding the latter, I have only a very few of these to sell, so there is no "buy it now" feature. All books can be signed and personalised at the buyer's request. Just click here for auctions! Thanks.
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Yesterday, I got word via Ellen Datlow that "Bainbridge," the closing story in Alabaster, has been nominated for an International Horror Guild award, in the category of Best Mid-Length Fiction, which happens to be the same category "La Peau Verte" won in 2006. So, that was a good way to begin a Friday. If you wish to see a complete list of this year's IHG nominees, just follow this link.

Somehow, I missed the fact that there was a pretty good review of The Dry Salvages (written by Bill Sheehan) published in The Washington Post way back in December 2004. I have no idea how I missed it. These things happen, I suppose.

Yesterday earned a W in the day planner, but I almost feel as though it should have earned a D, for dithering. I looked back at the "editor's preface" for The Dinosaurs of Mars I wrote on Thursday and found it wanting. But I also didn't quite see how to fix it. So, I fucked off to Emory for a bit, because I needed to track down a number of books on speleology and caving and karst topography, and since I need these references for The Dinosaurs of Mars, it was easy to justify the library trip as "work." My thanks to everyone who commented yesterday. There were some especially helpful remarks and suggestions from [livejournal.com profile] stsisyphus and [livejournal.com profile] corucia, which have actually had some impact on how the book will be written. Feedback can be very useful. Oh, and this question from [livejournal.com profile] jtglover:

In re: Dinosaurs, I can't remember if you've said, but will this be Mars á la Bradbury or Burroughs? Something else? Not trying to snoop too much, just curious.

Though the subject of Burrough's Barsoom may come up somewhere in the book, this particular Mars won't seem much like Barsoom or Bradbury's haunted red planet. It's not even going to be the colonized Mars I wrote of in "Bradbury Weather." This will be a very naturalistic Mars, Mars as early Martian explorers will likely find it — cold, hostile, barren, deadly, beautiful, and filled with secrets.

And this comment from [livejournal.com profile] stsisyphus, which I found particularly salient:

What I mean to say here is that I think that it doesn't make sense in comparison to her other works to construct a scientific artifice simply to justify how or why the characters managed to trod the Martian soil. The point isn't to demonstrate how it could be that a human could be exploring caverns of Mars, but rather what happens to them once they are there. I don't need to have a long infodump of exposition explaining the bioengineering of "Faces in Revolving Souls" and "A Season of Broken Dolls" to enjoy the stories. In fact, it would been distracting.

A great deal of Ms. Kiernan's fiction has dealt with the effect of otherness upon a humanity which is mostly organic in nature and composition. These are characters that cry, pump blood, puke bile, and occasionally piss themselves (probably one of my favorite details of the kill scenes in
tFoC). Kiernan doesn't shy away from making her characters palpable and sensually whole. Her androids, monsters, and such have on the whole been deceptively humanish. Admittedly, there are a handful of stories that have been in Sirenia Digest & Frog Toes & Tentacles which ran counter to this. Even then, however, there is often an organic logic to many of Kiernan's "alien antagonists." While they may not be human in form or consciousness, they are often project the efficient cruelty and instinct of nature. While one could portray the explicit subversion/destruction of rational, technological mastery by nature-chaos or ex-conscious forces - I don't know if it would normally be a CRK kind of story.

There will be many unanswered questions in The Dinosaurs of Mars, and a lot of them will present themselves at the opening of the story. For example, I am intentionally constructing the book in such a way that the reader never learns much at all about Babette Flanagan's trip from the Earth to the moon to Mars or the technology that makes this trip possible. I do have a lot of ideas about that tech. For example, I've been thinking about the Variable Specific Impulse Magnetoplasma Rocket (VASIMR), utilizing ion cyclotron resonance heating, which NASA first started talking about back in 2000, as a means of paring an Earth-to-Mars travel time down to only four months or so. Of course, I could just cut to the chase and envision a fusion engine for the Ascendency. But [livejournal.com profile] stsisyphus is correct in his supposition that what's important here is what the explorers find on Mars (and its effect upon them), not the tech that gets there. And yes, I also detest infodumps. At any rate, no new words were written yesterday. And they may not be today, as I have not taken a day off in nine days, and I think I might be due one. Maybe.

Things are going well with my Second Life, though I did relapse and do the stripping thing last night. At least the crowd was small and well behaved and there were decent tips. Spooky says she's become a "Second Life widow."

Oh, and Happy Bloomsday!

Yesterday, I reached the 1,000 mark with MySpace "friends." Does this mean I get a cookie or a gold star or something? I didn't think so.
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I'm a little slow getting started today, but at least I can say I got a full eight hours of sleep last night (even if it didn't start until about 3 a.m.). I cannot even recall how long it's been since I slept eight consecutive hours. A while. I'm groggy as hell, but Spooky's pouring coffee into me, so we have some hope that by the time I finish this entry I will be at least half awake.

Congratulations to "papersteven" for his winning bid in the hand-corrected Silk auction. Thank you very much.

Yesterday, I wrote the first 1,107 words of The Dinosaurs of Mars. But it was a strange beginning, and I am very unsure of myself. I fear that single review of The Dry Salvages still looms large in my mind, and I believe it is leading me to hesitate and to uncertainty. I don't mean the standard to which I hold myself, my own constant self-criticism. That's harsh enough. This is something else entirely. This is what Steinbeck meant by the difference between writing and writing for someone else. Reflexively, some part of me will not stop trying to second guess the likes and dislikes, the prejudices and preferences, of that invisible editor of whom Steinbeck spoke. I know, consciously, that this is folly. That hardly seems to help. Anyway, yes, the first 1,107 words. The bulk of the text is written as the diary of a "civilian observer," a writer chosen to accompany an exploration of Martian caverns in 2132. What I wrote yesterday was the "editor's" fictional "note for the third edition" of the observer's diary, which was recovered near the entrance to a cavern at the base of Apollinaris Patera, a few weeks after the exploratory team lost contact with a nearby base camp. Her diary made it back to an acquaintance at a lunar base, and most of what the world knows about the mission's fate is contained therein. NASA/ESA has so far refused to release most other documents associated with the exploration and are not pleased that Babette Flanagan's handwritten diary somehow slipped through (there are charges of forgery). That's the general idea, and the "note for the third edition" is being written in (I think) December 2148, sixteen years after Flanagan's disappearance.

The idea of having a writer/poet along on a scientific expedition came, I admit, directly from the screen adaptation of Carl Sagan's Contact, when Eleanor Arroway says, "It's beautiful. It's beautiful. I keep saying that, but I can't...my mind can't...words...should've sent a poet." It's been so long since I read the novel, I can't recall if this line is in there or not, but it's something I always loved about the film.

Preparing to write this novella, I have so concerned myself with getting to know Mars inside and out, that, until yesterday, I'd hardly spared a thought to what, in this story, has happened to human civilization and the Earth since 2007. And all those questions came rushing up at me yesterday. What wars have there been? Plagues? Political upheavals? Technological advances (this is manifestly not a "post-Singularitarian future," as has been the case with all my sf)? Ecological degradation? Population growth or collapse? Will print have vanished and all "books" be published via some electronic means? Will the internet have been replaced or evolved into some new medium of communication? Etc., etc., & etc. And then there's the problem of language.

I have always felt this is something that most sf writers gloss over*, and mostly for the reason that however much the English language might drift and/or evolve, the book that's being read is meant to be comprehensible to a present-day audience. This, I believe, is a great flaw in most science fiction, even great sf. Only a few authors have a) been up to the task as linguists and b) risked alienating their potential audience and/or publishers. Anthony Burgess springs to mind as an exception to this rule. One of the (I thought very peculiar) criticisms leveled at The Dry Salvages concerned its occasional use of a sort of future slang (my tip of the hat to this very legitimate problem), which was described as a "facile use of shorthand TV-series lingo." It seems to me that one either a) uses present-day language and simply ignores the problem that language evolves, b) meets the problem partway, adding at least some unfamiliar elements to the vocabulary of the characters (as I did in The Dry Salvages), or c) goes all the way and creates a new and evolved language through which the first-person narrative is told (this problem is far less of a problem if one is writing a third-person narrative). I might add a fourth solution, which would be to employ a highly unlikely "retro" language shift, such, as, say, a 22nd Century Dickensenian vogue that has everyone speaking as though they were in 19th Century London. For whatever reason, it has always annoyed me that most sf writers ignore this problem, and it is one of the points I'm struggling with in the opening pages of The Dinosaurs of Mars (especially given the above criticism of my attempt to solve it in The Dry Salvages). How might people speak and write in the early to mid 22nd Century? All I can say for sure is that it will be somewhat different from how we write and speak today.

I suppose this is one reason that so many sf writers seem addicted to conventions geared towards sf writers, where there are panels where these very problems are discussed. But I find such conventions to be prohibitively expensive, cliquish, and I just don't happen to particularly enjoy the company of other authors. Moreover, and this is the most important part, I want to find the solutions for myself. Art is not science. Even when art is about science, it is still art. There cannot be consensus, in the sense that science strives for meaningful consensus. And unlike science, art is not progressive. Personally, I have my doubts that science can be said to be genuinely progressive, but I'm pretty dammed certain that art is not. Which is not to say that it is not accumulative or accretionary. But the belief that sf writers are out there forecasting the future, that they have some social responsibility to do so, that's malarky, if you ask me. Writers of sf can only, at best, make educated guesses, and usually those guesses are wrong, and clumping together to form a consensus does not in any way insure against history unfolding in one of those other, unpredicted directions. People love to pick out the occasional instances where Jules Verne and William Gibson got it right; they rarely ever point fingers at their miscalls.

Anyway, I am going on, and it's almost 1 p.m.

I'm supposed to speak with producer D today, but I cannot imagine how I will extract myself from The Dinosaurs of Mars and all these questions and switch gears to "Onion," then switch right back to The Dinosaurs of Mars. No idea at all.

*Postscript (6:17 p.m.) — Reading this paragraph five hours later, I think I was indulging in excessive generalization and exagerration, exacerbated by grogginess and the side-effects of generic "Ambien." So, apologies to anyone I might have offended, annoyed, perplexed, etc.
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In theory, we have six days of this trip remaining.

There's been nothing to report since the drive up to Gloucester on the 10th. The sun has kept us indoors, which would have been fine, except I've discovered that I was entirely mistaken in my belief that I could write in a make-shift office amid the peace and quiet of rural Rhode Island. Indeed, more and more, it seems I am incapable of writing anywhere but at my own desk, in my office, at home. This experiment is, in that regard, a resounding failure. I've written not one word of fiction since arriving here on July 26th. I know that many other writers do it — write outside that "room of one's own." I know that for a fact. Too bad I'm not one of them. I haven't even gotten around to proofreading The Dry Salvages for the e-version. I have, in the main, been quite frelling useless. And I could ill afford a month without work.

We have tried to watch the Perseid shower, but a very bright waning moon, nocturnal clouds, and a bit of light pollution have combined to make the meteors all but invisible from where we are. We've been out two nights straight and have counted a paltry nine meteors between us. I will admit that #9 was perhaps the most brilliant meteor I've ever seen, but on the whole it's been quite a disappointment.

We'd thought about making it up to Salem and Marblehead today, but neither me nor Spooky were up to the wild Bostonian traffic and the brilliant shining sun.

Right. Enough of the public displays of glumness. More later, inevitably...
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We made it through two chapters of Daughter of Hounds yesterday, as planned, chapters Two ("Soldier") and Three (as yet untitled). Today, we're gonna try to do two once more, though the chapters are beginning to get long. I need every spare moment I can get, as I have only 16 days (counting today) remaining until the ms. is supposed to be delivered to my editor. And reading back over it again, I love this novel so very much. I want to do right by it, and I want it treated right by the people responsible for getting it to readers. I haven't seen the cover yet. Anyway, here's today's Zokutou Page Meter thingy:

Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
222 / 691
(32.1%)


My thanks to everyone who took the time to vote in yesterday's poll and/or post a comment re: e-editions of The Dry Salvages. I've read all of them, your comments. Some of them, I will admit, set me to considering factors I'd not previously considered. I think I'll probably tell subpress that I'd like to go ahead with the e-version of the novella now instead of waiting. It's a small risk, but I haven't taken nearly enough risks lately. I'll post updates here as they are available. And yes, it would be available in more formats that PDF. I was just using (sloppily) PDF as a short-hand meaning all e-versions.

Jeff VanderMeer has very nice things to say about To Charles Fort, With Love and Alabaster in his blog and has also posted a short and peculiar interview sort of thing we did. Just click here. It's all true, I'm afraid, but at least now I can stop worrying about amphibious hybrids off the coast of Massachusetts.

Tomorrow is Beltane, and I have to admit that Spooky and I have been so swamped, what with the trip to Birmingham and getting the novel proofed and a dozen other things, that we've not had much time to prepare. After we read today, we'll finalize our plans. This is sort of where I was going when I mentioned the bit about the difficulties of being a more or less solitary practitioner of Wicca. Spooky and I are entirely responsible for all our rituals and ceremonies and celebrations. Any details that must be attended to, we must attend. And that means that time must be set aside to prepare all that which needs to be prepared. And we have to make sure that, during that set aside time, we're in the right state of mind and not too exhausted and so forth. Right now, I sort of wish there were some wonderful big Beltane celebration going on somewhere near Atlanta that we could take part in. But there doesn't seem to be. It's strange, having recognized the need for ritual in my life, and now being hard pressed to insure that the time is there when I need it to be there and that I'm not too tired to devote the energy to it that's required.

Now I should have breakfast and coffee and get my head into the Daughter of Hounds space. I need to be much more awake...
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Er...let's try this again. The first time I posted it, I accidentally set it so that only mutual friends could vote. Dumb nixar that I am. Sorry.

So, Bill Shafer at Subterranean Press has been encouraging me to make my sf novella, The Dry Salvages, available as a free downloadable PDF via the subpress website. At first, I thought sure, cool, why not, let's give it a try. Then Spooky, who minds the eBay inventory, pointed out that we presently have 13 copies of the trade edition and 19 copies of the limited edition in stock and offering the book as a free PDF could lose us a minimum of $1,085 dollars in potential eBay sales. I mentioned this to Bill, and he believes that people would still buy the book, even though it was available for free, and he points to similar successful examples by Cory Doctorow and Charles Stross as evidence. But I remain skeptical. I do very much like the idea of making the book available as a free PDF. It seems like a great way to get a lot of people to read my sf who never have. But I really can't afford to eat over a thousand dollars in lost eBay revenue. So, I'm dithering as to whether I should offer the book a a PDF now or wait a few more months, allowing additional time to sell our remaining copies of the book.

Hence, this poll. Please do not lie. I can tell when you lie, even over the internet, and flying monkeys with rusty corkscrews will be dispatched to make you sorry. And if you've already bought the book, don't bother answering. Thanks.

[Poll #719478]

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