Twist ending? I read all the way to the end and never found a twist ending. Clearly I am a moron. =(
Love the photos, as always.
I would like to know why you changed the tense, if you ever get up the motivation to tell the reason. I'll say again, I love the way you write, and your use of tense is no small part of that. When you use present tense, though, it throws me off a bit more...as in, it makes the narrator less reliable (to me) because it makes me feel like they may be changing the story as they tell it. On a whim, maybe, or due to faulty memory.
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Date: 2010-04-09 08:55 pm (UTC)Love the photos, as always.
I would like to know why you changed the tense, if you ever get up the motivation to tell the reason. I'll say again, I love the way you write, and your use of tense is no small part of that. When you use present tense, though, it throws me off a bit more...as in, it makes the narrator less reliable (to me) because it makes me feel like they may be changing the story as they tell it. On a whim, maybe, or due to faulty memory.