I loved the looping time of "Houndwife." I think that chaotic sort of time is hard to get down well in a story. Most of the time it either gets impossibly confusing or seems super contrived. But I think you managed the rare feat of making it seem natural and unforced.
Thank you! This was a crucial aspect to the story, and one I worried over a great deal.
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Date: 2010-04-02 05:24 pm (UTC)I loved the looping time of "Houndwife." I think that chaotic sort of time is hard to get down well in a story. Most of the time it either gets impossibly confusing or seems super contrived. But I think you managed the rare feat of making it seem natural and unforced.
Thank you! This was a crucial aspect to the story, and one I worried over a great deal.