ext_127161 ([identity profile] greygirlbeast.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] greygirlbeast 2010-04-02 05:24 pm (UTC)


I loved the looping time of "Houndwife." I think that chaotic sort of time is hard to get down well in a story. Most of the time it either gets impossibly confusing or seems super contrived. But I think you managed the rare feat of making it seem natural and unforced.

Thank you! This was a crucial aspect to the story, and one I worried over a great deal.

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